Rivkah רִבְקָה ([info]lilrivkah) wrote,
@ 2005-03-30 18:28:00
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Sneak Peeks!
Okay, before I get to the actual picture posts, quick update:

First, it looks like Tokyopop is extending my deadline until mid-June. However, this does not affect the current street date of October 2005. I had my original deadline set earlier than I needed on purpose--so that I wouldn't put off working in the beginning only to rush at the end. So--technically speaking--I am actually still ahead of schedule, in spite of missing my original deadline. So . . . yeay! New goals!

Second, it looks like my roomie, [info]startingblocks, has suddenly decided he wants to join the Marines. While I'm fine with this--my brother is a Marine and it's a fine career and service to our country--it means I have to postpone moving to Manhattan. :\ He seems pretty set on this, too . . . Hmmm . . . ANYway. I also just found out some other news from my sister that isn't so great, but I won't know for sure until mid-April. But that may affect my living situation, too. *bleh*

On a different note . . .

Sneak Peaks!!!!! Whoohoo! \^o^/

Just a couple pages I've been working on recently, I don't think I've shown anything with Leah and Sarai together. These are the two sisters as they'll appear in the print version:

I like this example because it has a side-by-side comparison of a very similar panel in my earlier webcomic version of "Steady Beat" from a little under a year ago: http://www.rivkah.com/artwork/steadybeat/newpages/sb008r.jpg

So yeah . . . soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better now. >_<

And second, a side-by-side comparison of WHY I pencil my whole book before inking it. This is a look at some of my pencils back in November 2004:


And how I go and redraw everything because I change my mind and realize the panels can look better. I also realized my expressions have become a lot better. This is March 2005:


I don't do the whole "super deformed" characters very often in "Steady Beat," but I thought this made a good example of my progression over the past half year. I'll try and post some of my more dynamic panels at a later date. There's actually a lot of action in the last half of the book, and some pretty cool overhead "moving" shots.



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[info]n0sf3ratu
2005-03-30 05:52 pm UTC (link)
I really like the expressions in the last few frames...


You're art is amazing O____O

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[info]maiteoida
2005-03-30 05:59 pm UTC (link)
Oh my god I LOVE that SD Leah XD;; So cute!!

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[info]linverse
2005-03-30 06:14 pm UTC (link)
WHOOT!! Your progress is so incredibly inspiring!!! ^_____^ gaahh thank you so much!!! *sends you cookies* absolutely beautiful work- you are totally improving soooooooo much!! @_____@ <--- dizzy from jealousy

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[info]prettyism
2005-03-30 06:21 pm UTC (link)
your arts amazing,um it was good b4 too. I realy see what you meant by refined tho. Like getting a diamond out the ground and then polishing it until it shines. You give me hope. I like to pencil out all my pages first b4 inking, like batch processing i suppose.

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[info]zezu
2005-03-30 06:35 pm UTC (link)
ほんと に すごい です ね!

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[info]jou
2005-03-30 06:57 pm UTC (link)
NOOGIES! ... wow, this is really great stuff! Such beautiful clean lines! I look forward to this book.

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[info]elae
2005-03-30 07:03 pm UTC (link)
yowch! what lesbian would have nails like those?! eep. ^^;;

i absolutely -love- big sis' facial expression in that last sneak peek- it all fits together so well on her face, and i love her mouth! and yeah, the new deformed look is much more appealing, definitely a good decision to refine it. maybe it's just me, but when i look at a wrist tilted at that angle, i see the knob of the bone on the other side more than on the inside...

can't wait to pick it up and buy it in stores! keep it up~

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[info]lilrivkah
2005-03-30 07:23 pm UTC (link)
yowch! what lesbian would have nails like those?! eep.

You know . . . I actually had to think a while about that, but . . . I decided to keep them long because I spent an interesting portion of the chapter emphasizing the big sister's femininity (and how it kinda goes against many of Leah's preconcieved stereotypes).

But yes! LOL! So observant! >_< I may have to trim them down later. :D

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[info]elae
2005-03-30 07:33 pm UTC (link)
heh... well, i mean, yeah, there are really feminine lesbians, the so called "lipstick lesbian," etc... but... nails like that... I can't imagine even the most feminine of lesbians keeping those. ^^; i mean... well kept nails, sure. manicures, totally. nailpolish, if they want it. but... long nails (even just slightly untrimmed naisl!)... even if you're gentle... ouch. ^^; scratchy insides. It's just not logical, I guess?
I think if you want to show her feminity with the nail-shot, you may... show them short, but put a shine on them? to denote polish (clear or otherwise).
I dunno, you may do a survey in some yuri lj community or something, and see how many notice it/are bothered by it? I obviously can't represent everyone... all I know is what I've experienced. ^^;

But yeah, it's good to hear that you did consider that beforehand... it's always amazing how much thought has to be put into what seem to be the tiniest of details, as it's often those details that make it transition into something more real.
anyways. yay. ^^

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[info]lilrivkah
2005-03-30 08:53 pm UTC (link)
I've had long nails . . . *cough* >_>; maybe if I just "round the tips" it'll suffice . . . And yes, Sarai is deffinitely a femme. :P

Oy . . . -_-; Then again, it's been so long since I last dated . . .

:D *giggle* This ranks as one of the coolest discussions ever. :D

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[info]elae
2005-03-30 09:36 pm UTC (link)
Hehe, whatever you think works. X3; I think the whole "femme" aspect of her character is definitely apparant, don't worry about that. ;3
No dating? I'm sure the publication of this will help get your name out there. X3 That's what the artist's bio is for, right~?

Glad it turned out amusing. ^^; was worried you may not take well to criticism, since character design is something you obviously put a lot of thought into.

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[info]lilrivkah
2005-03-30 09:49 pm UTC (link)
Nah, I like criticism. It gives me something to work on. ^_~

Now I think I will trim down the nails . . . ^_^; It's starting to bug me, too. O_o

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[info]crispypoohs
2005-03-30 08:50 pm UTC (link)
WOOOOOOOW. You know, I didn't really think you improved THAT MUCH until I saw that side by side of Leah and Sarai. Your inking style has completely changed, and as if I thought there was more detail before, you've got way more now!

Your book is seriously going to be amazing... I am SO excited.

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[info]lilrivkah
2005-03-30 09:01 pm UTC (link)
*digging your new icon* :D

Heheh. Thank you, Crispy! >_< And you've been following my stuff for a while, too. :D What's even more wierd is going back to this particular story from November 2003: http://www.rivkah.com/artwork/manga/page001.htm Heheheheh. I shudder at the pain of looking at it, but then I realize that was . . . 1 year and 5 months ago . . . I think that RSOM 2 came out then. I wonder where I'll be in another year and 5 months, then? :)

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[info]crispypoohs
2005-03-30 10:33 pm UTC (link)
Lol. You've come RIDICULOUSLY far in the past year and a half. It's seriosuly AMAZING. It really shows what a bit of raw talent and determination can acheive. (I'm hoping I have the same drive eventually, lol) In another 5 months... god, I can't really see too much room for improvement. Maybe you'll start doing more toning and become amazing at that too? lol.
Your November 2003 comic is so nice, too. I mean, it's nowhere near the quality as you have now, but it's still pretty solid. If you look at my work from a year and 4 months ago (from Christmas?) I've come a long way, but nothing like you... It's actually REALLY encouraging to see what you do (haha, I sound like a total swooner)

(HAHA, and thanks about the icon. I totally <3 my new bright colors. They fit my current feelings and mood soooo well <3<3)

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[info]sxyblkmn
2005-03-30 11:20 pm UTC (link)
wow...

'nuff said! ;)

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[info]selphish
2005-03-30 11:21 pm UTC (link)
So cute. <3

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[info]tina_lee
2005-03-31 01:25 pm UTC (link)

I LOVE the sneak peaks!
Keep them coming!
^-^

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